Maverick-Jac Vaneik

[maverick]

Name: Maverick-Jac Vaneik
Nickname(s):
Gender: Female
Age: 16
House: Gryffindor
Appearence:

Hair: her hair is always changing. Maverick's mother is a famous hair stylist in America so her hairdo's are free. Mavericks hairstyles change as often as her mood. Recently her hair has been black underlying with vibrant pink and white blonde, with long extensions and a sweeping side-bang. she has died her hair so much even she wasnt sure what her natural haircolor was anymore.
Eyes (colour): her natural eye color is hazel but she has many different colored contacts to suit her mood, ranging from sea-blue to purple to rainbow and white.
Height: she is pretty tall for a girl at 5'6 or 5'7 but is the shortest in her family.
Build: she has long lean, muscular legs from riding and a flat hard stomach. she is leaning towards the over-skinny side but not completly flat chested with her bust ranging from 32B to32C

Picture: for more see avatar and signature
Celebrity Portrayl: Audrey Kitchings
Personality:

Maverick is a real party girl. shes funny, brave, outgoing, fun, loyal and completely outrages at times, but she also knows when its time for work. she is very smart and loves to learn more and more about magic, as she was raised in a muggle family. she can be overly stubborn at times and can hold a grudge. She is loud, and disruptive but generally very popular. she is completly boy crazy and sometimes she feels she gives it up a little to easy when partying.

Likes:

music, local bands from back home, japaneise style, hello kitty, bright colors, fasion, hairstyling, horseback riding, boys.

Dislikes:

hardcore rap, obnoxious people, assignments.

Personal History:

Maverick was born in a small town in Newfoundland, Canada but moved to Newyork, Newyork at a fairly younge age. her father had died when she was 4 years old. When he passed away her mother, Hilary Tilley-Vaniek, feeling they needed a change in scenery packed Maverick and her two brothers Seth and Jack up and moved them all to persue her career as a hairdresser and made a name for herself early on with her outrageous hairstyles. maverick was brought up in a privilidged home but wasnt spoiled. she always had to work for at least half of anything she wanted. When she got her Hogwarts letter she thought it was a joke from one of her friends, untill her mother had told her that her father was a wizard. since neither of her older brothers had showen any magical talent Hilary thought her children had not inheareted their father's gift, but she was wrong. Ever since since she stepped foot on the hogwarts train she was well known. she was outgoing and made friends extremly easy. she was so different from anything else. she had a best friend maddy who shared in her antics. What most people didnt know about Maverick was that she was a talented horseback rider and competted every year in show jumping and was taught under the best of riders. she owned a 16.3 hand high warmblood named Lyric who was 7 and a 14.2 little pony named Joey. she missed her horses emensly while away at school but she knew that she had to learn magic. Maverick was always smarter in school despite her heavily partying. she loved to learn and wasnt surprised to find out that she did well on her O.W.L's. That didnt mean she wasnt extremely nervous for her N.E.W.T's though.. she was always getting in trouble for sneaking in firewiskey and other things. what the school didnt know is that she often snuck off to go to clubs, sometimes goign all weekend and getting her mother to send notes saying she was going home for the weekend.

Family:

her family was extremly close. it consisted of her mother Hilary Tilley-Vaniek, her 21 year old brother Seth gabreil Vaniek and her 18 year old brother ben Jack Vaniek. Her father Jackson garth Vaniek passed away when she was only 4 years old. she was also very close with her cousin Frankie Jade Tilley. they were as close as sister growing up and still wrote letters to each other frequintly, since Mavericks Cell phone would work around Hogwarts.

Pet(s):

Maverick has many pets. She has her two horses, Lyric and Joey. She also has two chihauhuas' Bam and bella, a beagle mix copper, two rats, named Buffy and Willow, and a black owl named neptune. all of which except the rats and owl live at home with her mother and brothers.

Other:

when Maverick leaves Hogwarts she would like to persue her riding career and open her own barn and teach lessons as well as train horses. she would also like to go into modeling.

[Sirius Black]

Sorry, I can't accept this. Your character seems too 'perfect' and run of the mill. Try making her different and add more to her personality. Also you might want to try using capital letters at the start of sentences more (sorry that is the perfectionist in me )

Would it be possible if you could make her in a house other than Gryffindor?